Apply the copy-ready rewrites below, then re-audit.
Benefit Value & Specificity
Single format — vary delivery (video, audio, PDF, Discord).
Mix formats: video + audio + download + Discord access.
Trust & Social Proof
No recency signal — mention your latest post; dead pages don't convert.
Mention your latest post or set a posting schedule — a page that looks alive converts.
Trust & Social Proof
No intro video — a 60-second 'what you get here' video lifts conversion.
Add a 60-second intro video: who you are, what patrons get, why it's worth $3/mo.
Discoverability
Goal/milestone present — goals give visitors a reason to pledge now.
Add a goal/milestone: '$150/mo unlocks monthly community Q&A'.
Copy-ready rewrites
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About — short (235 chars)
The Map Vault makes D&D. Every month patrons get new work first, plus 3 membership tiers to match how much you want in — from $3/mo for the basics to a premium tier for super-fans. Join for DMs who want ready-to-run content every week.
About — long (709 chars)
Hi — I'm The Map Vault, and this page is where D&D gets made. Every month I publish new work first for patrons: DMs who want ready-to-run content every week. No ads, no algorithm — just the thing itself, delivered on a schedule you can count on.
Pick the tier that fits: 3 membership levels, from a low entry price to a premium tier for super-fans. Your support covers the real costs of making this (tools, time, software), and every tier includes something concrete — not just vague 'exclusive content'.
New here? Start with the welcome post, then pick a tier that matches how much you want in. If a tier feels too big, the entry tier is always there. Join now and you'll get this month's work immediately.
Tier 1 — Fan Club
$3/month (suggested — keep or adjust)
The essentials — every month's new work, plus the archive.
- 4 ready-to-run maps/encounters every month
- Vote on the next adventure + stat-block PDFs
- A private Discord/community with other fans
Tier 2 — Inner Circle
$7/month (suggested — keep or adjust)
Fan Club + monthly polls, WIP access, and a behind-the-scenes.
- 4 ready-to-run maps/encounters every month
- Vote on the next adventure + stat-block PDFs
- A private Discord/community with other fans
- Monthly patron poll — you pick what I make next
Tier 3 — Superfan
$15/month (suggested — keep or adjust)
Inner Circle + early access and the monthly Q&A video.
- 4 ready-to-run maps/encounters every month
- Vote on the next adventure + stat-block PDFs
- A private Discord/community with other fans
- Monthly patron poll — you pick what I make next
Welcome note
Welcome! I'm The Map Vault, and this is where D&D happens. New here? The pinned post explains what to expect each month. Patrons get this month's work the moment they join — if anything's unclear, reply to any email and I'll point you at the best place to start.